wonderful

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My soul is timeless,
my heart is spaceless,
no time and
no space
in only one dot,
I,my dear
am the end of the world.

beautiful... faves!

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...i love sleep because my life has the tendency to fall apart when i am awake...

This is great, so soft and sweet.

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"Damned woman mischievous whore
Heretic princess
Devil's own" - Dimmu Borgir

Okay, upon first reading, I thought it was a really good title and that caught my interest, but I was disappointed at the poem, 'cos it seemed too sweet and a little cliche, especially with the title being the last line, and the rhyme seemed a bit forced. What's the tear about, anyway? And you wipe it away and you're all lovey with the pretty poetic answer to the question, yawn. Then I read some of these comments, and I was like, "Yeah, yeah... suckers for the saccharine sweet" until I read ~niminitzar 's comment on how the good times go by too fast. That made me think about what the shooting star is supposed to represent, and actually gave the poem a whole other meaning. The reason I wasn't impressed at first was 'cos I thought it was just manufactured words without real meaning at all, but the shooting star burning away so fast... makes me think that this is about a fast, passionate relationship that came to an inevitable end... and that really reminds me of a girlfriend I broke up with six days ago. So... yeah, this is good writing. Really easy to miss that meaning, though.

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I don't regret a thing

To be that girl, I almost felt like you were talking to me. I love that analogy. Also, your description was wonderful. I adore short poems, so clear, so simple, leave you with a distinct taste in your mouth afterward. Sort of like how everyone loved "United States of Whatever" and "Fell in Love with a Girl." Very clear, short songs... can't get lost in the meaning. It also helps show that you really meant this and something else couldn't upstage it.

I really like this, I'm going to fav. it and then check out your gallery!

this is amazing, so short, so powerful, this is def a

nice economy of space. and feeling. you ain't no commercial rapper, yo. tho you flow, it be fo sho. ho. this is very well put together. fucka well put together.

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i am not a unique and beautiful .

your words stick to my heart like dried blood.





" all these momets will be lost.....

like tears.... in rain "


- bladerunner

So simple... but the images it conjures are so powerful. Gorgeous piece.

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Wow, very amazing work. So much said in so little words.